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Post by Sasha on Jul 17, 2006 23:16:20 GMT -5
Touketsu stood at the edge of the forest, her blue fur stood out like a sore thumb against the sea of green. She stepped into the shaggy darkness, and noted the humidity change. She sighed, wishing her fur was shorter, she searched for a place to get a drink, her tongue felt rough against her dry mouth. Finally finding a iver to drink from she lapped up the water, her lapping was calming to her, and so she became unaware of another's presence.
(This is the color i will tell you side comments in. Also i would like you to play a black fox. I willl give you a number on a scale from 1-10, 10 being the highest,1 the lowest of how you did. If you get a five or less you need another session, if you get a 6 or higher you are good enough to RP properly. Also this may include a fight scene, so be warned.
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Post by Donna on Jul 17, 2006 23:26:11 GMT -5
The Black Fox had been traveling for a while and when he got out of the forest and walked into the lush green clearing he finally smelled the green and the flowers that was blooming as a small gust of wind blew he smelled the other animal he didn't care he was thirsty as well and he wanted a drink even if it was his last he would get a drink. he could taste it as soon as he saw it. He walked slow to the streams edge and took a cautious drink as he watched the other.he was ridged as he waited for
the other to try something while he drank.
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Post by Sasha on Jul 17, 2006 23:29:39 GMT -5
Touketsu looked as the other creature took a drink, her fur bristeled and she growled lowly. Her body became tense, and her ears lay flat against her head. She would not attack, unless the fox growled back, if it did, then she would tear it apart, or at least try to.
(Ok.. the only thing i see wrong here is your grammar and spelling, you need to try being a little more literate.)
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Post by Donna on Jul 17, 2006 23:41:47 GMT -5
Occ:sorry gramers not the greatest.
The Fox,Was tired and really didn't want to fight he just wanted a drink and leave.so he drank deeper
He then lifted his head with with his brown eyes he watched the other animal to see if it made a move to attack he wouldn't provoke it but if need be he would fight.
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Post by Sasha on Jul 17, 2006 23:49:28 GMT -5
Touketsu snarled, her blood boiling at this creature, it was a fox, a sly creature, something one should not turn their back on. She turned away, holding her tail high, saying she was more dominant, though they truly hadn't fought. She growled soflty in frustration, the heat making her mind go crazy.
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Post by Donna on Jul 17, 2006 23:57:21 GMT -5
The Fox would have fought fought the other animal if he hadn't travel such a long distance but to let the other animal know that he wasn't afraid of it .He growled under his breath as he started to walk away. It looked like the animal was used to the cold not the heat. he splashed the the water as he turned around he turned back and growled back at the others animal.
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Post by Sasha on Jul 18, 2006 0:04:38 GMT -5
Hearing the other animal's growl she raised her tail higher and growled with malice, her hackles stood raised, and her muscles were flexed. She would let the creature make the first move, it could either run or fight, if it fought she would have no choice but to defned her dominance.
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Post by Donna on Jul 18, 2006 0:12:03 GMT -5
The Fox knew that if it fought this animal he would, Die for sure for he was to tired to he had traveled for hours to get to water and now that it had some he decided he would leave this time and live
to fight another day and he held his head high and his tail swished in the cool breeze that blew from time to time as he walked away the breeze blew his fur and he turned his head to see if the other followed him. he wouldn't run but he would walk he did have his pride you know.
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Post by Sasha on Jul 18, 2006 0:22:43 GMT -5
She snorted angrily, but walked away, her head held just as high. She was truly glad she didn't have to fight, but she would have fought with everything she had if need be. She smiled and sighed, her large frame fading into the distance.
(I would say this session is about over, The only problem is grammar and spelling other than that i give you an 8.)
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Post by Donna on Jul 18, 2006 17:05:28 GMT -5
OCC:(Thank, I'm sorry about the spelling and the grammar. I am going to night classes to help that. sorry.)
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